Woman of the Night - Version 1
WOMAN OF THE NIGHT
written by
Justin M.
Vera
© 2021
Justin Moses Vera
Juanito Gongora St., Benque Viejo
Del Carmen
Verajustin9@gmail.com
FADE IN:
Caption: 9:33
P.M. Corner of Joyce Blair St. and Juanito Gongora St., Benque Viejo Del
Carmen, 1998-12-12
1. EXT. STREET CORNER. NIGHT
A red Toyota Corolla with tinted glass rocks
back and forth. The rocking stops and 17-year-old HELEN opens the door, and comes
out of the car with her hair in a mess and her blouse in her arms. She looks
frightened. A male voice from inside of the car is yelling, but it is
incomprehensible. She walks away from the car, and the car speeds off. A figure
dressed in a black leather jacket and jeans came around the corner. It was her
pimp 50-year-old David.
DAVID
Where my
money at Bitch?
Helen hands her a rolled-up bunch of ten-dollar
bills.
HELEN
Here.
He takes it but does not break eye contact with her.
DAVID
Why the fuck
aren’t you dressed?
HELEN
I didn’t
have time.
DAVID
Bullshit!
Give it to me.
HELEN
Give you
what?
DAVID
Listen here you little shit. Are you going to make me ask again?
HELEN
It’s just my
blouse.
Before Helen could continue David slapped her. The
force behind his hand sent her to the ground. Hellen unrolls her blouse that is
still in her hand and hands the pimp a wallet. David took the wallet, opened it
and took out the money. He threw the rest of the wallet away. As he was turning
around to leave, Helen said…
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
HELEN
Can I have
something?
DAVID
(Angry)
Who you think you working for Bitch? You know how much you
fucken owe me?
Helen hung her head.
HELEN
No.
DAVID
Get dressed,
you look like shit.
David turns and walks away. As Helen gets dressed,
he turns the corner. Another figure comes around the corner. KIMBERLY, Helen’s
17-year-old roommate. Kimberly runs to the aid of her friend.
KIMBERLY
(Softly)
How you
doing honey?
HELEN
(Holding back tears)
I’m so
tired. I want to go home.
Kimberly picks her up and does a motion with her
head signalling “let’s go”. The girls walk up a hill…
2. EXT. HILLTOP. NIGHT
KIMBERLY
(Holding stomach)
I’m
so hungry.
HELEN
(Holding back tears)
Me too, but
I’m broke.
At the top of the hill the girls
see HECTOR, the 60-year-old cotton candy vendor, going back home.
KIMBERLY
I’ll go talk
to Hector. Wait for me outside.
As Hector is about to go in,
Kimberly stops him and talks to him just out of earshot. Helen sees that Hector
and Kimberly walk into his house. Helen waits outside. She starts biting her
nails and rubbing her face.
BEGIN FLASHBACK:
Caption: 9:33
A.M. Park 1986-12-12
3. EXT. PARK. DAY
AN EIGHT-YEAR-OLD BOY and A FIVE-YEAR-OLD GIRL laugh
and play on a seesaw.
END FLASHBACK:
4. EXT. PARK. DAY
Kimberly burst out of the door with two bags of
cotton candy and Hectors pants.
KIMBERLY
Run!
It takes a while for Helen to get up. After She
realizes the situation, she gets up and runs. The girls run further up the
hill. Hector is out of breath and decides to let them go. He goes back inside
and slams the door.
5. INT. HELEN’S HOUSE. NIGHT
The girls get home and open the door. They
search the man’s pants and find two five-dollar bills and three dollars in
coins.
KIMBERLY
That’s all
he had.
Kimberly stands up.
KIMBERLY
I’m gonna go buy something. You need anything?
HELEN
(Holding her cheek)
Ice.
KIMBERLY
(Pointing to the Kitchen)
There’s some in the fridge.
Kimberly goes out the door and Helen walks into the
kitchen.
6. INT. THE KITCHEN, HELEN’S HOUSE.
NIGHT
Helen is digging around in the freezer and
finds a pack of ice cubes.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
She closes the freezer door and walks out the
kitchen. She was about to sit down as the front door opened. Kimberly brought
some bags…
KIMBERLY
Let’s go upstairs.
7. INT. THE BEDROOM, HELEN’S HOUSE.
NIGHT
The girls sit on the bed.
HELEN
What’d you
get?
Kimberly takes the things out of the bag.
KIMBERLY
Some hotdogs, Snickers, and your favourite…a cookies and cream
Hershey’s bar.
Helen smiles and reaches for the Hershey’s bar but
flinches in pain. She holds her face.
KIMBERLY
I know what you need.
Kimberly jumps off the bed and stoops under and
pulls out a box. She digs all the way to the bottom and pulls out a half full
bottle of Jack Daniel’s.
KIMBERLY
Here.
HELEN
What do I do?
KIMBERLY
Drink some. I drink some on days that I can’t take the pain
anymore.
Helen stares at the
bottle.
BEGIN FLASHBACK:
Caption: 9:33
P.M. Helen’s Childhood Home 1986-12-12
8. INT. THE KITCHEN, HELEN’S
CHILDHOOD HOME. DAY
Helen’s father WILSON is very drunk. Two
children are in the corner crying and covering their ears. Wilson grabs his
wife VANESSA by the neck and throws her to the floor. He raises his fist to
punch her…
END FLASHBACK:
9. INT. THE BEDROOM, HELEN’S HOUSE.
NIGHT
KIMBERLY
Helen!
Helen snaps out of it.
HELEN
Yeah?
KIMBERLY
Are
you gonna drink it?
Helen stares at it again…
HELEN
Yeah.
Helen opens the cap and takes a sip. She sets the
bottle down and wrinkles her eyes close.
KIMBERLY
Ready
to go back?
HELEN
No. But it’s not like I have a choice.
10. EXT. STREET CORNER. NIGHT
Helen sits under a mango tree. Out of the shadows she sees a DRUNK
GUY. He staggers to where she is.
DRUNK GUY
(In Spanish)
Nobody is, hic. The boss of me! Isn’t that right Beautiful.
Helen ignores him.
DRUNK GUY
Hey, hic. You deaf?
Helen continues to ignore him.
DRUNK GUY
Hey, hic… Hey… Hey lady… Puta!
Helen got mad and
lashed out!
HELEN
What do you want?
The drunk man lunged toward her. He
misses but trips and falls on top of her. On the ground he holds her down with
his knees. Helen struggles for a while but she gives up and chooses to accept
what is about to happen.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
She closes her eyes and stops
resisting. He unzips his pants… he is kicked in the jaw! Helen opens her eyes.
It takes her a while to focus because of the tears welling in her eyes. She sees
twenty-five-year-old ANTONIO. He is wearing a sporty outfit. He has on a dark
Gray t-shirt and navy-blue short pants, with matching navy-blue Nike running
shoes. Antonio asks…
ANTONIO
Are you okay?
HELEN
Yes… thank you.
Antonio helps her up.
HELEN
Who… are you?
ANTONIO
Antonio Barreras. What’s your name?
HELEN
Helen. You’re not from around here, are you?
ANTONIO
Nah. I am visiting the parish. I want to be a priest. I’m from
Guatemala. You want to sit down and talk for a while?
Helen nods.
11. EXT. PARK BENCH. NIGHT
ANTONIO
So, who is Helen? The mysterious woman of the night.
HELEN
I ran away from my house… I was so young… I ran for so long that
I got lost.
ANTONIO
How did you end up here?
HELEN
I rested on a park bench. A man gave me some food and water… I
felt really sleepy. After I woke up, David had me in his house. He said that He
found me in a coma. Ever since I’ve worked to repay him for what he did.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
ANTONIO
How has it gone?
Helen looked down at
the ground and slowly shrugged.
ANTONIO
Why do you keep working for him?
Helen was about to answer but found she had no words
to respond, so she fell silent. After a long pause. She tries to justify things
and tries to convince herself she was saying what she means.
HELEN
He says I owe him for a lot of things.
ANTONIO
Like what?
Helen looked down at the ground and
shrugged. She looked up at him and stared at his face. Helen hung her head and
started to cry.
HELEN
I don’t know.
Antonio
hugs her and says…
ANTONIO
Come with me… to the church.
Helen looks up at Antonio with swollen red eyes and mucus
slightly trickling to her upper lip. She wipes it away with her blouse and
asks…
HELEN
What about my friend?
ANTONIO
Let’s go get her!
12. EXT. STREET CORNER. NIGHT
Helen runs around the corner followed by Antonio. She screams at
Kimberly…
HELEN
Kim! Kim! Kim, come with us.
KIMBERLY
Look dude, threesomes are a hundred extra… each.
Where’s the money? You don’t look like you pack that kinda cash in those pants.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
Antonio looks at Kimberly in shock.
HELEN
No, he… he wants to help us.
KIMBERLY
He your new boyfriend? Remember what happened
with the last one?
ANTONIO
I’m not her boyfriend. I’ll take you two to the
church. Away from David and this life.
Kimberly
stared at them both and answered…
KIMBERLY
I don’t want to go.
HELEN & ANTONIO
What?
KIMBERLY
I don’t want to go… I don’t know how to do
anything else. Going to the church isn’t for me. Go Honey, you never wanted
this life. You’re meant for more.
David walks around the corner
pointing a gun. Kimberly puts her hands up to her mouth. Antonio pushes David’s
arm away and disarms him. Antonio tackles David to the ground, breaks his arm
that is reaching for the gun on the ground and punches him out cold.
KIMBERLY
How’d you do that?
ANTONIO
With the power of God.
Kimberly
and Helen look at each other awestruck.
ANTONIO
I’m playing. I used to be a
Kaibil.
HELEN
Let’s go Kim.
Kimberly shakes her head and stoops
down to check on David. Antonio looks at Helen and says…
ANTONIO
Let’s go to your house and take your things
out.
13. INT. HELEN’S HOUSE. NIGHT
Helen burst through the front door.
14. INT. HELEN’S ROOM. NIGHT
Helen finds an exercise book in Kimberly’s box
and scribbles a letter to her. The words “I will always love you Kimberly” can
be seen. She puts what little she has in a schoolbag and rushes out.
15. INT. CHURCH. NIGHT
Fifty-year-old FR. NOLAN, wearing a full black
robe with slightly visible wrinkles and slightly greying hairs around his
sideburns, sits behind the confessional.
ANTONIO
Father Nolan. I brought you Helen. She’s seventeen.
FR. NOLAN
Thank you, Antonio. Good job. Let us begin, Helen.
16. INT. THE BEDROOM, KIMBERLY’S
HOUSE. DAY
Kimberly sat at the table and ate a Hershey’s Cookies and cream
bar. In the background, David with a cast on his arm walks upstairs and the
radio plays. Kimberly gets up and turns the volume louder. The RADIO ANNOUNCER
says…
RADIO ANNOUNCER
Today’s news is sponsored by Reimer’s Service
Center. New arrivals of Motorcycle tires and tubes at Reimers Service Center.
Call 823-0122 for more information. Available countrywide. Belize Electricity
Limited sends crews to investigate unplanned power outage in Cayo. Murder rocks
Punta Gorda Town again. Shooting victims at Cayo junction identified. Police
investigate the emergence of a group of sex traffickers posing as religious
leaders. Police have apprehended one individual under the alias of Antonio who
refuses to cooperate with authorities. More tonight on Love F.M. News…
17. EXT. KIMBERLY’S HOUSE. DAY
At the front door a GROUP OF POLICE wearing
bullet proof vests kick the door open.
18. INT. THE LIVING ROOM, KIMBERLY’S
HOUSE. DAY
Police spread out into the different rooms.
19. INT. THE BEDROOM, KIMBERLY’S
HOUSE. DAY
Police go into Kimberly’s room and surround
her.
20. INT. THE BATHROOM, KIMBERLY’S
HOUSE. DAY
Police kick down the bathroom door and see
David on the toilet. An OFFICER points a shotgun to his head and says…
OFFICER
Mr. David, you are under arrest for Human
trafficking. You have the right to remain silent and refuse to answer
questions. Anything you say may be used against you in a court of law. You have
the right to consult an attorney before speaking to the police and to have an
attorney present during questioning now or in the future.
21. INT. THE WAITING ROOM, POLICE
STATION. DAY
Kimberly is sitting on a bench. The door opens
and the officer that raided the house comes in.
OFFICER
Ms. Kimberly, we have David in custody. He will
go to jail for a long time. We need you to help us. Your friend has agreed.
KIMBERLY
I don’t have any friends.
The
officer turns on his walkie talkie and says…
OFFICER
Send her in.
The
door opens and Helen runs to her friend.
FADE
OUT.
I just read this while drinking a cup of coffee. Great work. :)
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